I accept that the article itself is very plagiarized from its counterpart in AWoIaF in terms of structure. ![]() I see that you have decided to delete the page and I will explain my mistakes once and for all.įirst of all, I do not speak English very well, even so I decided to do the page mainly for not "wasting all that work" in reddit and also improve it more by adding "Histories & Lore" information. Many people are curious about the military strenth concept in the series, and I think a good article would be quite useful. See also the message I left you in your personal page ( ). I am currently locking it so you can make a backup copy. You left me no choice but to delete the page. The first error was not made by you, but it is your responsibility to go over editions that other users make and proofread them. Moreover, the page contains factual errors (Aeron had nothing to do with the burning of the Lannister fleet, Braavos does not have the most powerful fleet in the world, etc.). Second, you corrected a very few errors (ProtectorOfTheSevenKingdoms corrected much more, although did not have to - it is your resposibility) and there are plenty more - spelling, grammar, punctuation, using different tenses at the same paragraphs, redundant/missing/wrong prepositions, poorly phrased sentences and more. You have disobeyed my instructions: first, not only you did not omit the references to transcripts, but you added more adding a few references to pages in this wikipedia does not make up for that. I know how it feels when a page you made is deleted, so I have given you a chance to fix the errors. If you do not - the page will be deleted. You should have proofread the page and added the references before, not after posting it, and definitely not a bit now and then. You cannot make a page so offhandedly and expect ProtectorOfTheSevenKingdoms or ILikeLore or any other user to make the proofreading for you. ![]() Later you can take care of the references and other visual features. I repeat what I told several times: first of all you must fix the many errors (spelling, grammar, punctuation and phrasing). You can refer only to episodes in this wikipedia or to other canon sources like HBO viewers guide or "The World of Ice and Fire", not to "Springfield! Springfield!" or "". If someone simply has doubts about where to get the information, just go to one of the scripts and then Ctrl + F.Įpisode scripts cannot be used as references. I decided to use some scripts as references, I have tried to find the original scripts or at least from the same source. If you do not fix all the flaws, the page will be erased. I wrote a list of the flaws in your personal page ( ) For example, the whole section of "Army of the Dead" is beneath all criticism. ![]() There are still tons of errors in the page (spelling, punctuation and grammar), and many sentences and paragraphs are phrased very poorly. The very few references you added are not even visible - they should appear at the bottom of the page. If it seems too much bother to you, then you should not have created the page in the first place. Since you decided to make a page of military strength, then you should have gone over all the episodes of all the seven seasons and added the references before you posted the article, not afterwards and only after being told to, and not couple here and couple there. ![]() You cannot just copy information from somewhere in the internet and post it as facts. Moonracer ( talk) 15:03, Octo(UTC)įorgive me my English and also that I have not put references, as I said the article is based on the subreddit that I mentioned and there are seven seasons to see and verify. I want help about the forces mentioned in the Telltale game and blu ray (especially the War of the Five Kings Feature, the Dance of Dragons and Histories and Lore Jon Humbert ( talk) 19:57, Octo(UTC)įirst fix all the errors in the page, then add any visual features. Jon Humbert ( talk) 21:22, Septem(UTC) Telltale and Blu ray Just search something like "got army sizes" and there is alot of people in quora and reddit asking this and Yes is plagiarized. ProtectorOfTheSevenKingdoms ( talk) 20:33, Septem(UTC) Either way, this page is plagiarized from AWOIAF from top to bottom. Jon Humbert ( talk) 23:23, Septem(UTC) I haven't seen anyone ask about this once. Why? Many people ask this topic and there has never been a total work that condenses everything. ProtectorOfTheSevenKingdoms ( talk) 21:57, Septem(UTC) I personally don't believe military strength requires its own page.
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